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Ori got reborn! She lost her memories but at least she's back.

Page 57 Did they not even leave a note explaining this extremely regional idiom? Essentially a meeting is over, leave, when you're...

This is the Kaguya ending all over again, school children beating up trained body guards for some poorly thought out ending.

Add fonts like Young Dreamer and Subsequent Sparkling. Using mango for everything is dull, should reserve that for when it's loud.

...what the fuck is going on

Um, the king didn't execute, exile, or at least punish Duke Lars even after he sent assassins to kill him?

The publisher is the one that reached out to the author. So at least he's not at fault for trying to force his way back into the...

The break all the arms and legs is clealry referring to Miu not Akita.

With her having actual ntr super powers, this seems really gag oriented. I'm guessing we won't ever get a real ntr payoff.

Nah, accidental kisses ain't it. They're as bad as drunk/sleeptalking confessions. Author doesn't want to put in the work to naturally...

Well, huge amounts of money being thrown around in stories never affect the plot in any way. So it's really a nothingburger. It's not...

So an old man in a loli's body uses a clay strap-on to rape a goddess. There were several lines crossed, but also some not.

Yes, please more development for the girls so we actually want to root for them. Show their confidence, strength, and drive. Not just...

Use contractions to make the dialogue feel less stiff. If it can be contracted, contract it. You're, it's, they're, etc.

Oh, so the ridiculous tea leave conspiracy that we were all complaining was actually part of a bigger conspiracy. There's a ton of...