Recent content by VenerableImmortal

It was a difficult read. There's even a repeated text. I wish someone would upload the licensed version.

There's missing text on Page 11. And most probably that it used be "I" instead of "AI" on 42. Lastly, please learn how to use Perspective warp. Thank you.

Are you able/willing to redraw?

@fgosegul, that's funny and clever. I wouldn't say there's a contact though.

You can improve a lot by simply using the Word's Editor or Grammarly. At the very least, you will be able to eliminate those misspellings.

I can see that effort in manually writing text. Cheers!

I like your idea in claiming chapters. BTW, this is listed as oneshot in the new titles, but I'm sure it's not. At least keep the "XX" from the original cover. About the fonts, please search for similar looking "serifs".

I'll put this on "Plan to read" just in case I wake up and decided to be a degenerate.

Okay. This is my first josei smut.

@BarakRhys I'm actually a bit sad that there's no competition because it usually leads to improvement. BTW, you may not like what I will write but please do understand that I'm only doing this because I care and I want people to be better.

@BarakRhys this is undeniably a snipe. You could have continued from the previous chapter you have released but obviously you won't. It was a good decision that you stopped typesetting. Now I hope your group can find a good quality checker. Anyway, I welcome the competition especially because...

For me, the other upload is better overall, except for the cleaning.

I wish that someday the typesetter will be better. We still have one untranslated bubble in 35.

From Page 13 should be "toe it her"