In the previous chapter's comments, my critique of the poor translation wasn't taken seriously. This chapter is no different. Take a look at the following:
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The same text is used twice in two speech bubbles.
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The journalist uses male pronouns when talking about Reiko.
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It...
You shouldn't call yourself translator. Leaving your favorite words untranslated is really unprofessional. Whats so special about them that you can't translate these words?