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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    Okay, so ignoring the fact that Coleman survived a gunshot wound to the head, Gloria’s heart turning to stone is just “a medical bill” etc… man this series has so much bs people shouldn’t survive. Yomi’s explosion was a pretty big plot point culmination for her. It was this big act of...
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen - Ch. 41

    You know what, I had a weird thought. Instead of Yomi, how do we feel about having the evil girl with glasses, the one who was obsessed with Falka, be the one to save Zane and Hibana? That would be a character development for her. She saw that she was wrong about Mashiro/had a change of heart...
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    You know what, I had a weird thought. Instead of Yomi, how do we feel about having the evil girl with glasses, the one who was obsessed with Falka, be the one to save Zane and Hibana? That would be a character development for her. She saw that she was wrong about Mashiro/had a change of heart...
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    I know it’s way too late to restart the series, but rebellion should have started with Mashiro being raped. Then it should have been the series about her trying to escape. Then you have tension. What happens when the person who thought they were invincible loses? What happens when Wonder Woman...
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    Like, it’s the little things. In the original, if someone was raped, they acted differently afterwards. They might be anxious, look over their shoulder, not trust someone, hide in a group. Their body language changed. Their motivations changed. Etc. I mean one even had a villainous breakdown and...
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    Okay, so I know I’m usually very long-winded in text so I’m going to try and keep this simple. I’m not angry anymore. I’m disappointed. And I think I figured out the root causes. 1) this series is no longer character-driven. It’s instead now event-driven. 2) emphasizing the wrong things...
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    Okay so young champion has Jinrouki winvurga under the updating on Saturday tab
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen - Ch. 40

    Oh it’s been obvious to me that the author has had no idea for a while now. He had one idea: rape Mashiro. That’s it. He’s done that now and the plot of the series went to crap. the original series had multiple plots running at the same time in the same chapter. It had a plot, b plot, and even...
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    Yeah but that’s… unless the translation was really really wrong…yomi should be off doing something that is both way more important in the plot and also would take place before the event being shown in the chapter. I understand the concept of non-linear storytelling but that was a very big...
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    Well…that’s a time jump and not what the end of the previous chapter left off on. Okay. I’ll give it a shot but I’m not expecting much now.
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    Ah. So we’ll see it tomorrow then. Anything interesting happening in the screenshot?
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    Okay. And I checked young champion and nope. Still only up to ch43. So it’s not out yet. I did a quick google search and google says it’s not scheduled until the 25th. I know that doesn’t mean it’s an accurate/definitive date… but it’s better than nothing.
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    Hmm. Well it’s not up on my usual raw scan site yet. Though if you don’t mind spending a few bucks, young champion dot jp is the official website. Though if you wait a month you can read it for free.
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen - Ch. 40

    No. You can call it bad writing. This is bad compared to the OG. OG managed to weave an a plot, b plot, and sometimes a c plot all in one chapter, at a brisk pace along with cause and effect, and much better dialogue. This series just sucks in comparison.
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    Jinrouki Winvurga Hangyaku-hen

    Yeah, so obviously the attack on the supreme commander will fail. Though, it would be really hilarious if somehow they succeed because then wtf do you go from there? Okay so we will wind up seeing Aoka raped alongside Mashiro. Half the written chapters on the authors website are of nemuro...
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