This is written so bad, if your gonna tackle the topic of abuse you kinda need to actually get into and not just brush shit over, if your story isn't strong enough to handle that then dont even try, it just drags everything down and makes the characters seem worse for it.. I mean no one is...
Hes not a totally irredeemable piece of shit yet, just a kid who cant say no or voice his own wants and feelings. I personally think he can still work it out but once he starts actively and willing choosing to go out of his way to bounce between the girls that's when I feel like the line will...
How would Fean leaning make him stronger last time I checked fett n percs weren't helping any one stay up right lol more like hitting a perfect 90° angle at the waist n going limp 🤣
This junk yard has hit namek levels of drag out and kai has hit freeza levels of 5 minute time distortion along with not fuckin dying yet lol so many other interesting things have been teased in this arc it would be nice to get a move on and start unpacking that other stuff ie. The 5th gen...
I get what your saying but naw it really wouldnt, have you ever been working on something and bump the back of your head, it's not like you just drop your tools. Maybe if he got slept and in the process of losing consciousness he relaxed his hands but getting hit in the head doesnt just make...
I'm kinda over this story. It's been nothing but annoying for awhile, nao hasn't had any development since the first chapter, watching her get catered to like a special needs kid is getting real old real quick and I get " big booba" huhuh but that only goes so far before you might aswell move to...