The fictional age has absolutely nothing to do with whether it’s a loli, so I don’t know why you’re bringing that up. It’s a bit subjective, but I’d probably agree that she’s not a loli based off how she looks.
Indeed(fancier version of yes).
The main character, Iris, could be considered a loli, but the definition is a bit blurry so it could go either way. Lolis don’t need to be as small as Kanna from Dragon Maid, but this one is right on the edge, and I don’t really care either way to be honest.
What I do care about are the odd...
Mate, we can’t not worry about it. That accent is just ridiculous and you are changing what the author made. All the changes and notes with unwarranted opinions you’ve made have been making this a less enjoyable read, but to have such abundant grammar issues and typos on top of that? Why the...