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This chapter was hilarious, I feel like it was a great blend of naturally pushing the dialogue forward and capturing the insanity of the situation. The crucifixion was the cherry on top, that was so ridiculous it was great.

Personally, loved the chapter. I feel it was tastefully done and lets Mars actually understand more about how it feels to be looked at in a sexual way and how creepy it can be. Its not like the boys are purposefully being terrible (at least from what I can tell), they're young and don't...

The story is so intriguing, hoping it keeps up the storyline well!

Praise be the new chapter.

Yess!!