@Menchichan Well to be fair, you are spending your free time to do something for others non-profit, so it's actually really formidable. The most important thing is that you wanna improve, so I'm pretty sure you will get better in no time! I'm looking forward to more chapters from you and...
@Menchichan I'm sorry for harsh words! Instead of bit*hing about it, I'd like to share some tips, so hopefully it will be easier next time (and I don't sound like a total asshole):
1. Please never, NEVER, NeVeR stretch the text like this. There are ways to fit the text without murdering the...
I'm glad I wasn't the only one to think about Touko and Yuu while reading this. Anyway, this looks interesting. I love the art and the creepy feeling. That first colored page is beautiful. Count me in (ง'̀-'́)ง
Ahhh... Okisaki, for helping out main ship sail like no one else, you deserve the world. Push 'em down girl! (ง'̀-'́)ง
Yukino, get it together and go get Nobara ffs. What are you waiting for?! ლ(ಠ益ಠლ)
@Lhmac I disagree. I'd take asshole who's at least honest over supposedly "nice" and "selfless" person. I know that you probably saying your point of view, but still not everyone considers selflessness as a necessary condition for likability. Concept of likability and it's conditions are...
Looks like Nozomi and Shino will be yet again kept separate for a while, since it’s Nozomi’s deveplopement time. I’m guessing Heidi will play a big role in it. I can’t say I’m a fan of keeping them apart, cause there’s hardly anyone interesting in the side cast to make those chapters...
Nobara was more daring than I expected. I’m guessing our shouting worked, huh? Well then Okisaki-Sama I don’t remember your pairing for the love of me, but still...
OKISAKI-SAMA! GET THAT GIRL!! ヽ(`Д´)ノ
All of you discussing Sorawo being selfish kinda forgot about the shit she went through in the past.
Sorawo is massively flawed and broken character, but it really is what makes her interesting.
I'm glad she's not another copy pasted one dimentional protagonist who -for some reason -loves...
When I saw that over 100 comments compared to 20/30 on previous chapters I had School Zone flashback and thought that we have some development on Ouji-sama as well ლ(ಠ益ಠლ)
F for all the people who got bamboozled just like me (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)
Right when I started to reconsider if death flags from the first chapter were really death flags this chapter slaps me back to square one.
About the morning glories thing... We have "Morning Glories and Kase-san" which are really cute and sweet and didn't end in tragedy, so just maybe it's not...