Negatte mo Nai Tsuihou Go kara no Slow Life? Intai Shita Hazu ga Nariyuki de Bishoujo Gal no Shishou ni Nattara Naze ka Mechakucha Natsukareta - Ch. 1

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aren't they tired of this bullshit? even the logic behind this story is not makes sense anymore, some third rate random guild staff can erase high ranking adventurer license outside the work time and in random place? wtf
 
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what a trainwreck... random guy can "revoke" someone's license at any time? seemingly the MC here is really important, but nobody has tried to contact him? as for the girl, parents abandoned you and withdrew you from school... why would she ever think to go to the authorities, right? she's gonna go into the dungeon instead. makes sense!
 
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How the hell guild members has authority delete sss rank adventurer license.? Also the intro is contradicting with the premise like isn't magic games is precious commodity so how the hell he is so poor like he already sss rank and already done it for so many years, unless the guild is predatory as fuck..
 
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Author didn't even try with the intro, SSS class and leader to some of the best clan and she doesn't think that's valuable? at least make the setting convincing
According to one of the comments on novelupdates, she had no idea what his rank was, and thought he was basically a chump who couldn't advance ranks.

Doesn't make it much better, but at least in the novel an attempt was made.
 
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I’m glad I’m not the only thinking that the first looking really bad. It makes no sense that even if you’re a high ranking guild staff member, you should be aware on who the top adventurers are. It would’ve made more sense to frame him in a scandal that would then lead to revoking his license. Not off to a great start so hope the next few chapters will improve. Thanks for the translations.
 
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"got dumped by girlfriend then random girl suddenly appear" plot.
But this is adventure and didn't see harem tag so it's adultxyoung romance but with rpg element ... Its kinda new to me.

Only one sss rank? Guess the one who fired the mc is the guild president/CEO. Like your workplace in reality, even if you MVP at your job, you still a worker. Your boss still has the right to fire you anytime based on contract. Lol...

It still ok story ... But still not tell how strong the guy is. I'll stick around. Thanks for the translate.
 
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This intro makes little sense, if this guy is part of a large powerful clan and he is the sole SSS rank adventurer then he would most likely be well known and rich thus leading to the employee recognizing him. Also even if he wasn't some well known figure then the system should of at least had in place a process to fire him and the ability to ID the employee firing someone. How the fk did noone find out who did this mistake?!

The government can be incompetent but we are writing fantasy land incompetency here.
 

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