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myok Supporter Joined Aug 20, 2018 Messages 456 Mar 15, 2025 #2 This reads more like the outline of a story than a full story. It jumps from scene to scene with the absolute minimum of explanation or development.
This reads more like the outline of a story than a full story. It jumps from scene to scene with the absolute minimum of explanation or development.
