Yuri no Hajimari wa Dorei Kara - Ch. 7.1 - Hickey

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what the... she just really going about the slave thing after the last chapter like that ? and no question it ? like how dense are you ?
Do she really think like: "Why would she doing this to me ? hmm... ? must be for shit and giggle ? :thonk: damn Sakane ! " :facepalm::facepalm::facepalm:
what? theres a third one in the colored page….. its foursome?
so it seem this will become harem like where Chiyoko become slave of everyone, huh ? i thought the 3 way where each all love one another
 
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This is my first ever translation, so I hope I did well!!!
You need to improve your typesetting. The color of the cleaned text bubbles doesn't match the same as the original so it looks like someone just colored it in with a different color rather than being like the original text bubble. Also, the default comic sans is pretty egregious. The least you could do is try using similar fonts to the previous scanlator.
 
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You need to improve your typesetting. The color of the cleaned text bubbles doesn't match the same as the original so it looks like someone just colored it in with a different color rather than being like the original text bubble. Also, the default comic sans is pretty egregious. The least you could do is try using similar fonts to the previous scanlator.
Damn, that's a bit aggressive.
 
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This is my first ever translation, so I hope I did well!!!
Thank you for picking it up and you did well for a first attempt, and I wouldn't let any of the extremely negative criticism get you down. Especially since this was provided generously so we had an update to the series. I typically handle QC for my team and would gladly advise, shoot me a message if you want any feedback.
 
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There is no way in hell any of the ad hoc verbal agreements these girls are making would stand up in court, and as soon as there's a conflict over Chiyoko access rights they're all staring down the barrel of potentially years of civil litigation.

Hell, right here in this chapter you've got Sakine making an unapproved alteration to the communal property: Yukishiro is almost certainly entitled to compensation for that unauthorized hickey, if she chooses to pursue the issue.

Sage advice for life, everybody: always get legal counsel before entering into any form of gyaru slave timeshare contract.
 
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been a minute so I forgot how aggressive Sakine was starting to get last chapter when she suggested the slave stuff. I am fiercely curious to see how Mafuyu will handle things when she finds out, Chiyoko seems to really value Whatever they've got going on right now so it'd be devastating if this formed a rift between them...

I believe in the throuple route but it's gonna be a Journey lmao

thanks for the chapter!
 
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This is my first ever translation, so I hope I did well!!!
Font is a little hard readability-wise (not in sizing but more ligature-wise, I think there’s a guide somewhere on MD that lists common scanlation fonts to use), but the sizing is good. :)

Also sentence structuring is great, same with the flow of the text.
 

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