Desire for a Reply! - Oneshot

[Animelie]

Lol you can't tell me the girl wasn't already in love with him when she was able to list all his flaws, almost like she had been observing him closely

 

[Selected_Sound]

I come to this one every once in a while, it's still an adorable read.

A serialization would've been neat, but I'm fine with it staying as a oneshot.

 

[Wiltzyt]

Cuteness Overload!!!

 

[Coldlight]

A oneshot that's worthy of re-reads every once in a while. A short romance story featuring a male lead who starts out weak but works hard at improving himself, and becomes capable of decisive action by the end. The uncommon and praiseworthy kind of male lead in a romance. Doesn't have to start out strong, if he can develop to be better later.

Re-reading also allows me to appreciate better how Ichizono, while super blunt and harsh, had an awful lot of constructive criticism to give Sunaki from the get go. It's super easy to say "you suck" or "you're shit at this", be done with him and leave, but she really did go out of her way to point out practically all the things he can improve on.

She actually liked him just a little bit early on, because she cared enough to not leave him immediately after giving the rejection reply, and maybe even snuck in some of her own preferences in the big bundle of feedback she gave him. She's the rare kind of non-violent tsundere that I can always appreciate.

It will take more than a miracle for this to get an anime given it didn't even get serialized, but I'd love to hear Eri Kitamura voice Ichizono. She's a perfect fit for this tsundere gyaru's role.

 

[Scrabbleman]

Page 14 is spectacular. Really awe-dropping.

 

[BusinessGL]

Chad (I don’t have a joke)

 

[Flymonster0953]

WHY A ONESHOT, MY WHOLE LIFE, RUINED

 

[sevenoutoften]

a manga that probably would've been nice if it got serialized.

this, this could have been a great series.

 

[Prince-Z]

Didn't expect it to be good: it was good.

It could have been serialized i guess but they probably wouldn't have had the couple get together than. Sometimes serialization can worsen the story itself. I can't think of a good example rn but I'm sure someone can easily reply with one.

Maybe a continuation of a few chapters would have been great.

 

[hnam201]

The heroine is JUST MY TYPE. Well done 10/10 <3

 

[BvLnA]

Mission failed. You'll get her next time

I low-key read this with the CoD voice

 

[Jayswing103]

I can't stop grinning like an idiot every time I re-read this.

 

[Wizardrone]

how I missed this seven years ago!

 

[Prince-Z]

how I missed this seven years ago!

Damn, people are still rereading this after so long? That's really damn impressive.

 

[IamaTire]

Ahhh, i longed for a story about a wing woman that is too good to be able to win at the end.

 

[GrumpyGizmo]

More development in one chapter than a wholeass 400 chapters of rent a girlfriend lmao

 

[Lewd_Beast]

Adorable
Plus MC grows a pair and actually works his way into popularity (Unlike certain MC's)

still had a spineless simp personality making him a total loser forever more.

 

[DexerAnother]

the Avenger
mission failed successfully

 

[yurimakesmeuglycry]

I'm still mad that this is a one-shot and not at least 4-5 chapters.

 

[sheikhjoy]

hahaha even though i guessed the end while reading still i couldn't but smile. Just how Ichizono explained many flaws or bad habbits of Sunaki its easily guessable that she loves him and wants him to improve, but i was more thinking about the changing into better player or improving himself with baseball and being its top player of the school was just a dream and next scene we would see that nothing has changed. But glad that didnt happen.
Ending was too cute. Loved it, Wholesome.
Good read.