Hmmm.... The tone is pretty off and all over the place for currently all chapters. I am not sure yet what the story is supposed to be
It needs some more, but the fact that the tone wasn't properly established is a possible bad sign.We're just getting started and whether it's revenge, redemption, introspective journey, tragedy or action is still up in the air. Give it some time to simmer - the first chapter was cooked really good, while these follow-ups are natural.