Suna Mahou de Suna no Oukoku wo Tsukurou ~Sabaku ni Tsuihou Sareta kara Ganbatte Sokoku Ijou no Kokka wo Tatete Mita~

[kinglucas23]

This kingdom must've never heard or gara from Naruto or sir crocodile from one piece

 

[Shinobu]

This shit aint even good enough to be considered mid

 

[Junpaku]

Maybe would have had some potential if it wasn't obvious that it intends on transforming the "diverse" races into "generic human with maybe an extra body part that denotes their non-human status"
It's like digging all the cookie dough out of cookie dough ice cream tossing it away to have only vanilla

 

[Autismonaut]

Something tells me the artist has never spent any time in the desert. People in the desert dress in a particular way for a reason, because it's very hot. Seeing maid dresses and western suits in the first chapter immediately broke any suspension of disbelief for me.

 

[Done25]

Garbage series.

 

[SpunkyDragon]

Maybe would have had some potential if it wasn't obvious that it intends on transforming the "diverse" races into "generic human with maybe an extra body part that denotes their non-human status"
It's like digging all the cookie dough out of cookie dough ice cream tossing it away to have only vanilla

Fr, the ant dude gets a whole transformation and ant girl gets huge tits and no clothes lmao

 

[SkyCastrum]

Think greatest problem here is just the lack of anything beyond barebones story boarding. Particularly when it really needs more. Like, why the hell is sand considered a useless element when you’re surrounded by it? Especially if you’re going to immediately show off tons of strong sand spells?

 

[Stupid_Fish]

Ahhh more fantasy slop, my favorite.

 

[MeraShow]

I honestly wished they kept their ant forms instead of turning into humans. It could have been interesting to have their forms slowly evolve instead.

 

[Jaydon4life]

After the most recent chapter I've started to see many similarities to "Tensei Shitara Slime Datta Ken" with the whole over powered Mc, the naming system, making of a nation with as of now only monsters and two humans. Now I'm not saying its exactly the same but there are many similarities. I've thought about dropping it but I would like to see where it goes as of the most recent chapter.

 

[Urdine]

1. he made a sand castle.
2. looks like if it has sand in its name, its sand. Should see what he can do with a sandwhich next!

 

[q1bert]

Imagine liking sand www
- Anakin Skywalker (or Darth Vader)

 

[Trig_Zero]

Is this that Horus Heresy I keep hearing about

with more boobas apparently

 

[InsaneAwesomeTony]

I... I don't know what to say to this.... The classic generic exiled because useless turns out to be op. Zero effort put in, is just op. Pretty women keep falling on him.

Fast paced, no substance story. And the super power is sand! Fucking embarrassing dude... Made a bed and entire home and kitchen out of it.

Sand in your food, sand in your ass crack.

Just all round bad. Just straight up boring.

 

[PD2]

Generic garbage. NEEEEEXT!

 

[Ironclad]

It gets everywhere.

 

[DreadKaiser]

Something we've all read a million times already.

Man with shit powers (lol) gets exiled, becomes God and/or Death, builds paradise on earth, gets some waifus and resolves all his issues with very little effort all while being praised for how awesome he is.

 

[FGularsa49]

Anakin biggest fear

 

[Kony2020]

They really do publish anything huh. Reads like a first draft of a middle schoolers first idea of a premise.
AI could and would come up with a more compelling story with a one paragraph prompt even if you forced it to rely on these tired tropes.
Magic has never been so boring when apparently anything goes instantly with no rules or restrictions. In this story sand magic = just whatever needs to happen

 

[Goldenzeal]