The perspective when they reached Moon Marine is...very wrong...unless they were about to be hit by a mountain of a tsunami.
I do wish the story spent a bit more time filling in the background info. We've already been through a world-threatening crisis but we barely know anything about the world. Since a theme here is supposed to be that this isn't "just a game world" and the characters are starting to care about it, it would be nice if we, the audience, were also given a reason to care about it. But right now it is presented just as thinly as a game world would be, which kind of undercuts the narrative intention.