Another one that becomes sensitive at the first sight of someone not agreeing with their point of view without the ability to comprehend basic human values and lacking accountability understanding.
Let's cover your first point about the characters:
- FMC: For someone that's scared, broken and making mistakes she also doesn't seem able to grasp the concept of accountability for her own actions. From her point of view nothing she did in the past was wrong and what's happening to her is somehow a result of destiny and bad men in her life. In summary, I believe that people should receive help but at the same time I believe that not everyone should. She simplly falls in the latter category based on what she's shown as a person. I already explained why I believe this in my seccond post.
-MC: He is a doormat but here's the catch. Helping her, not wanting to own her, use her and shame her is not the issue. I do agree with you on these being traits of someone praiseworthy. However, the way he does it without raising any issues with the FMC about her past relationship with her family and friends, her toxic behavior and even her poor intellectual choices is what makes him a doormat. I know you don't see it this way because you have a doormat's point of view on the matter, I understand people can have different views on the same subject and that's ok.
This here ladies and gentlemen is the perfect case of a lonely cuck embracing his keyboard warrior energy. If you would have bothered to read my second post, because you clearly didn't get the message from the first one, you would have understood that my issue is with the characters themselves and how the story is told, not the concept of the story. I even wrote an alternative to chapter 14 to showcase how as a writer you could even redeem characters that have a toxic personality. I admit it's not the best writing for something that came out of my ass in the 5 minutes it took to write that whole post but it should get the point across, and yes, I do have higher expectations from someone that does this for a living like the author(bear in mind this is based on a novel which underlines even more how bad the story is). You on the other hand, I have no expectations from whatsoever. I know you will go on through your life thinking you are always right, continue living like a cuck while viewing yourself as a white knight and that's completely fine; because I know that not all people are the same and thank our lucky stars for that.