Thank God, I was reading various other comments saying how they thought this was great so far. I read up to the current 8 chapters and I think it's pretty terrible, irredeemable even.Ngl, the entire circumstances is pissing me off.
Warning, nonsensical rant: First we're told that MC was effectively abandoned by his mother, said mother was apparently an excellent teacher and all of them are seemingly acting as if the mother was some kind of saint on earth (obv the juxtaposition is purposeful but like it's irritating in a way that ik the pay off won't be as good as I wish it would and they are almost assuredly going to try and play off the mother as some sort of redeeming figure despite the trauma that mc clearly still holds)---then couple this with the senior staff who's in a "mentor" position treating him like he's shit without trying to explain anything despite seemingly the weight of his situation. And then acting like he's somehow stupid for reacting the way he is, when again ABSOLUTELY NO ONE is taking any effort to explain anything to him. To put insult on top of injury, the protag is practically coerced into the position first and foremost by them purposefully arranging an expensive funeral they (or at least the above mentioned senior) seem fully aware mc is not in the position to pay for and try to act like the 70 million is somehow in his favor (again while not explaining that risks or responsibilities to mc) and then going on abt "oh we're not sure if he's worthy" behind his back despite basically subtly forcing the position into him. They mention the bs that they "trust the previous director's judgement", the director who, let us all collectively remember, ABANDONED mc 20 YEARS AGO and has not met him since.
I'm sorry ma'am (referring both to the mother/director and the senior) BUT HOW TF DO YOU THINK YOU KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT MC ENOUGH TO BE ABLE TO "JUDGE" HIM WHEN THE LAST TIME YOU SAW HIM WAS WHEN HE WAS EIGHT
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Rant over, tldr: interesting concept but initial setup makes it feel like the execution will leave much to be desired and I am irritated.
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I agree with u cause wtfNgl, the entire circumstances is pissing me off.
Warning, nonsensical rant: First we're told that MC was effectively abandoned by his mother, said mother was apparently an excellent teacher and all of them are seemingly acting as if the mother was some kind of saint on earth (obv the juxtaposition is purposeful but like it's irritating in a way that ik the pay off won't be as good as I wish it would and they are almost assuredly going to try and play off the mother as some sort of redeeming figure despite the trauma that mc clearly still holds)---then couple this with the senior staff who's in a "mentor" position treating him like he's shit without trying to explain anything despite seemingly the weight of his situation. And then acting like he's somehow stupid for reacting the way he is, when again ABSOLUTELY NO ONE is taking any effort to explain anything to him. To put insult on top of injury, the protag is practically coerced into the position first and foremost by them purposefully arranging an expensive funeral they (or at least the above mentioned senior) seem fully aware mc is not in the position to pay for and try to act like the 70 million is somehow in his favor (again while not explaining that risks or responsibilities to mc) and then going on abt "oh we're not sure if he's worthy" behind his back despite basically subtly forcing the position into him. They mention the bs that they "trust the previous director's judgement", the director who, let us all collectively remember, ABANDONED mc 20 YEARS AGO and has not met him since.
I'm sorry ma'am (referring both to the mother/director and the senior) BUT HOW TF DO YOU THINK YOU KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT MC ENOUGH TO BE ABLE TO "JUDGE" HIM WHEN THE LAST TIME YOU SAW HIM WAS WHEN HE WAS EIGHT
Ndndjeidicnkskapgbrnwkkxknkcnfnsnsjskiajehfbfn
Rant over, tldr: interesting concept but initial setup makes it feel like the execution will leave much to be desired and I am irritated.
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Yeah, the concept is okay but the plot and story beginning makes me not want to continue.Ngl, the entire circumstances is pissing me off.
Warning, nonsensical rant: First we're told that MC was effectively abandoned by his mother, said mother was apparently an excellent teacher and all of them are seemingly acting as if the mother was some kind of saint on earth (obv the juxtaposition is purposeful but like it's irritating in a way that ik the pay off won't be as good as I wish it would and they are almost assuredly going to try and play off the mother as some sort of redeeming figure despite the trauma that mc clearly still holds)---then couple this with the senior staff who's in a "mentor" position treating him like he's shit without trying to explain anything despite seemingly the weight of his situation. And then acting like he's somehow stupid for reacting the way he is, when again ABSOLUTELY NO ONE is taking any effort to explain anything to him. To put insult on top of injury, the protag is practically coerced into the position first and foremost by them purposefully arranging an expensive funeral they (or at least the above mentioned senior) seem fully aware mc is not in the position to pay for and try to act like the 70 million is somehow in his favor (again while not explaining that risks or responsibilities to mc) and then going on abt "oh we're not sure if he's worthy" behind his back despite basically subtly forcing the position into him. They mention the bs that they "trust the previous director's judgement", the director who, let us all collectively remember, ABANDONED mc 20 YEARS AGO and has not met him since.
I'm sorry ma'am (referring both to the mother/director and the senior) BUT HOW TF DO YOU THINK YOU KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT MC ENOUGH TO BE ABLE TO "JUDGE" HIM WHEN THE LAST TIME YOU SAW HIM WAS WHEN HE WAS EIGHT
Ndndjeidicnkskapgbrnwkkxknkcnfnsnsjskiajehfbfn
Rant over, tldr: interesting concept but initial setup makes it feel like the execution will leave much to be desired and I am irritated.
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THANK YOU, OML- I already knew it was gonna end up being smth like "Oh, MC you HAVE to forgive her, she had such big responsibilities and nyah nyah nyah-" I DON'T GIVE A FUCK. Because how dare you leave your own kid to raise others. How dare you not see him ONCE in 20 years, if he only saw her a few times with a good excuse to back it up then maybe it would pass, but not once? In 20 years????? Oh hell NAW! And don't get me started on the kids, because I can already smell the "Oh, but, you're not our director." and one smart ass kid being all like "The director liked US more." Because there is always some rando kid in these stories who has a weirdly competitive mindset with the bio child. And I just-...the premise has great potential, but only if the author actually adress those problems later on, and not just sweep them under the rug for some random ahh plot. This is clearly a big source of conflict/trauma for the MC that should take more than 2 chapters to get past. I want MC to resent those kids, not because I hate them, but because it’s a logical answer to everything here. I know that I would HATE their guts, once again not because of them, but because with my mother gone, the only thing left to hate...well...are them. I don't know, maybe it will actually be good! But right now? I fear it will suck.Ngl, the entire circumstances is pissing me off.
Warning, nonsensical rant: First we're told that MC was effectively abandoned by his mother, said mother was apparently an excellent teacher and all of them are seemingly acting as if the mother was some kind of saint on earth (obv the juxtaposition is purposeful but like it's irritating in a way that ik the pay off won't be as good as I wish it would and they are almost assuredly going to try and play off the mother as some sort of redeeming figure despite the trauma that mc clearly still holds)---then couple this with the senior staff who's in a "mentor" position treating him like he's shit without trying to explain anything despite seemingly the weight of his situation. And then acting like he's somehow stupid for reacting the way he is, when again ABSOLUTELY NO ONE is taking any effort to explain anything to him. To put insult on top of injury, the protag is practically coerced into the position first and foremost by them purposefully arranging an expensive funeral they (or at least the above mentioned senior) seem fully aware mc is not in the position to pay for and try to act like the 70 million is somehow in his favor (again while not explaining that risks or responsibilities to mc) and then going on abt "oh we're not sure if he's worthy" behind his back despite basically subtly forcing the position into him. They mention the bs that they "trust the previous director's judgement", the director who, let us all collectively remember, ABANDONED mc 20 YEARS AGO and has not met him since.
I'm sorry ma'am (referring both to the mother/director and the senior) BUT HOW TF DO YOU THINK YOU KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT MC ENOUGH TO BE ABLE TO "JUDGE" HIM WHEN THE LAST TIME YOU SAW HIM WAS WHEN HE WAS EIGHT
Ndndjeidicnkskapgbrnwkkxknkcnfnsnsjskiajehfbfn
Rant over, tldr: interesting concept but initial setup makes it feel like the execution will leave much to be desired and I am irritated.
Good day fellow netizens