Tsuyokute New Saga - Vol. 11 Ch. 107.2

[SexualBard]

Aight, the series overall was pretty good, but that "reveal" and the entire wrap up was kinda ass. It feels like as soon as they traveled to meet the Demon lord the author just started rushing the story to its conclusion.
About the relationships, after the racist cult arc shit with the MC froze, seemingly forever which is cheap, and even seran, with the princes it got done in one page, and the demon lord seem cute but it also seems to end without anything going on.
About the black wings, kinda like the homunculus in a jar? but without any character whatsoever, funny that the entire reveal that was being aluded to for the past few dozen chapters was done and gone within the last chapter mostly in a monologue. But hey not every manga can be Helck...
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Go read Helck!

 

[ThiccThighsSaveLives]

Just a brief summary of my head canon for anyone who wants to live in bliss for a better end.

Romance:
After learning about the alternate timeline, Urza realizes the reason Kail kissed her during the sealing pact was because they actually did it for marriage in his original timeline. Riize learns of this too and ends up deciding the give up on pursuing Kail as they never had a chance to build a romance in his timeline and Kail has been too focused on defeating the demon lord so that nothing could develop in this timeline either. The only true love Kail ever knew was with Urza so he ends up with her. Maybe you could go the harem route, but that just doesn't sit right.

Seran obviously ends up with Louisa, its set up pretty hard, he ends up being the demon king and helps the moderate faction by smoothing over a lot of demon-human relations. There isn't much conflict or obscurity there, so it ends up more straight forward. Maybe he ends up with Yulriga, but Louisa very clearly showed at least some feelings towards him even if it was because he reminded her of Randalf.

Villain:
The twist villain will be Randalf and the stuff about Kail becoming a demon was sort of a red-herring except that situation happened with Randalf instead losing himself to the demon magic. The reason why he is trying to go back in time is he regrets killing the old demon lord and really did want to negotiate peace. He wants to go back in time and fix things since he betrayed Louisa's trust and he's willing to sacrifice all of humanity that he saved in order to do that. He justifies all his actions with the fact that it will all be undone if he's just able to go back in time and fix the future instead. He is a good parallel to Kail also wanting to make things right in past, but his methods are why he's evil. It's a much better parallel than just "Kail but evil".

Other than those two plot points the rest was on the right track and was just overly rushed. It would have been nice if there was more conflict like Goldar and Zentos where just because he got to go back doesn't mean he gets to save everyone, or things turn out different so people from his past aren't able to assist in one way or another.

 

[Freman]

Well... that was an ending that happened.

The story had potential, and I do like the characters, but the author lost momentum after about the first third of the story, and never recovered. Kail and Urza should have had romantic development, as well as Seran and Louisa and Yulriga (yes, he gets two girls).

Still, at least it ended. That's better than stories that get axed without resolution. Sort of.