Ahhh.... this one was particularly rough. The author had a very good thing going, and if they were just allowed to go at their own pace, I think we would have gotten something really amazing. I really liked all the introspective writing early on, about Yattara's thought process. There was such a ... a feel to it that was unique.
Damn it. This one truly deserved better. Fare ye well, Yattara.