@KingoRodriguo
Wording I would change:
Page 5, panel 1, bubble 1: Today, it begins
Page 11, panel 1: Well, we'll be in your care
Page 12, panel 2: Typo. donw -> down
Page 13, panel 6/last: go with the next -> go to the next
@KingoRodriguo
Wording I would change:
Page 5, panel 1, bubble 1: Today, it begins
Page 11, panel 1: Well, we'll be in your care
Page 12, panel 2: Typo. donw -> down
Page 13, panel 6/last: go with the next -> go to the next