Tonikaku Kawaii - Vol. 33 Ch. 305.5

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Up there for the most awful TL job I've seen
True, but at least it's not machine "TL".

When I was a youngun, misspellings and grammar errors (like this was rife with) drove me nuts. Nowadays I'm quite content to ignore even an ocean of them, as long as I can sift them out to understand the true meaning underneath.

Beats the heck out of a machine's lovely spelling and grammar, but often bastardization of the underlying meaning to something else entirely. They're much too prone to give us something that "makes sense" to the algorithm, and creative thoughts often fly in the face of the algorithm.
 
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5 minutes is not enough time for what they could get up to. Also, yeah, that 'sofa' is not really going to cut it, either.

And the PS said nobody reads that shit, but I did. Sounded like a bunch of news bites, probably another creative way to depict the credits for the volume this extra comes from.

The Hokkaido trip got pretty frisky, it looks like, either way. I was considering re-reading (not here) at some point, so I'll figure out where this goes then. I assume the 'only five minutes left until students knock at the door' refers to a moment from a main chapter, and I think I might know which one, but it's hazy. There was one moment during the Hokkaido trip where they all got up early, and the credits even reference the thing they got up that early to see.
 
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Is this the first that this series has come close to almost actual segs scene?

Also that Gquuuux ref. lol.
 
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Is this the first that this series has come close to almost actual segs scene?

Also that Gquuuux ref. lol.
think so
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It's been a while I've seen this level of "quality". With development of neural networks I thought it went out of existence. Heck, I even forgot how to decipher such "translations".
 
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To be honest, I was certain they hadn't done it, if only because the implications of Tsukasa's regeneration sounded like it would be unpleasant for either or both of them... but after it was clarified she could at least delay the regeneration effect, I started to accept the possibility. Especially with how friendly they've gotten by the 300-ish chapters.

However, it is also important to remember they're still only a couple of months into a marriage where they barely really knew each other beforehand. It's maybe around 5 months, to be speciific. Story essentially started in May, with Nasa's 18th birthday. We shifted forward to June sometime in the 60s of chapters, then for whatever reason skipped forward fairly quickly to July not too long after by Ch.77. We don't see mention of time moving forward into August until Ch.159, and the only implication that we have advanced into September happened in Ch.228 with a conversation between Tsukasa and Aya over whether it's still summer anymore, with Aya making an absurd comment about September being the start of her personal summer.

Far as I'm aware, the trip this extra takes place during is within 5 months of the proper start of their relationship and marriage, simultaneously, and as of around Ch.330, I still hadn't seen mention of time definitively advancing to October.

As context, the flash-forward chapter around 140-ish gave the impression the story will be coming to a conclusion some time in December of the year the main part of the story takes place during (I interpret the present-day part of the story as taking place entirely within the year of 2018, the year ToniKawa started publication- keeps it simple, that way).

This means that if the story continues to extend in chapter length, the longer the months will take to pass, since, as far as I'm concerned, if the story reaches December, we're probably in the end-game. As it stands, we still have all of October and November in-story before that happens.
 

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