Kouiu no Ga Ii - Vol. 9 Ch. 40 - Craving

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Ahhh, the chief totally deserves a good man! Give her one, author!

typo p.12 "like watching does videos" I believe "does" is not needed here
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You cannot be a pr to yourself. You can't revise your own work. That's common knowledge
You'll only see half of your mistakes at best. You need a fresh eye.
Also, I believe you said you're not native speaker
 
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That panel with the guy the chief was imagining really set off alarm bells for me:
1. From the looks of it she was knowingly “the other woman” and was ok with that (surprising from a morality perspective)
2. She was still thinking about him while masturbating
3. He bears more than a passing resemblance to Murata, so is that playing in to her affection for our MC?
Nah, the guy she's thinking about is indeed Murata, look back over at chapter 2. That's exactly how Murata was dressed, and since that's the chapter he and his girlfriend at the time broke up, it lines up with what's being said in the flashback/memory bit
 
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I was hoping for the two brunettes to huddle up and share info but maybe we’ll get that in the next chapter instead?

That panel with the guy the chief was imagining really set off alarm bells for me:
1. From the looks of it she was knowingly “the other woman” and was ok with that (surprising from a morality perspective)
2. She was still thinking about him while masturbating
3. He bears more than a passing resemblance to Murata, so is that playing in to her affection for our MC?

Also can we talk about how she started getting off while looking at herself in the mirror? Is that a narcissistic thing? Maybe she’s bi? It poses some real questions in itself.


All of this put together really makes the chief a more complex character than we knew until now, so I tip my hat to the author. I didn’t see any of this coming.
You're way overthinking it.
No, it is not the chief, yes, it is murata, yes she wants to bang murata, yes she will bang murata. The chief doesn't even have the same hair color and hair.

Murata and Imashita will bang, Murata will be the one who finds out Imashita and Tomoka are friends, they report it to tomoka immediately, and Tomoka is excited by the prospect. They will have a 3 some. And Imashita is not looking for a relationship, she just wants to bang.


Chapter 52: Tomoka finds out when Imashita and Muratang call her after finding out right after they bang
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Chapter 54: Imashita explains how her career makes it hard to maintain relationships. In this chapter they confirm with each other if they are okay.
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A Joke they send to Murata, (but they don't bang).
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Chapter 55:

Translation :Next time, let's invite Tomo-chan too and play winkyface
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Source, I read the raws
 
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You're way overthinking it.
No, it is not the chief, yes, it is murata, yes she wants to bang murata, yes she will bang murata. The chief doesn't even have the same hair color and hair.

Murata and Imashita will bang, Murata will be the one who finds out Imashita and Tomoka are friends, they report it to tomoka immediately, and Tomoka is excited by the prospect. They will have a 3 some. And Imashita is not looking for a relationship, she just wants to bang.


Chapter 52: Tomoka finds out when Imashita and Muratang call her after finding out right after they bang
8.jpg


Chapter 54: Imashita explains how her career makes it hard to maintain relationships. In this chapter they confirm with each other if they are okay.
5.jpg


A Joke they send to Murata, (but they don't bang).
6.jpg


Chapter 55:

Translation :Next time, let's invite Tomo-chan too and play winkyface
8.jpg

Source, I read the raws
You’re awesome, thanks 🙏
 
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Ahhh, the chief totally deserves a good man! Give her one, author!

typo p.12 "like watching does videos" I believe "does" is not needed here

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You cannot be a pr to yourself. You can't revise your own work. That's common knowledge
You'll only see half of your mistakes at best. You need a fresh eye.
Also, I believe you said you're not native speaker
It's fixed.

No need for the extra discouragement.
 
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It's fixed.

No need for the extra discouragement.
While I'm feel gratitude to you I also share sentiment expressed by him in general (not about you but about common sense of proofreading). And the way he worded it does not look like a discouragement.

Please continue with the translation and thank you. You are doing a great job and it is awesome that you strife to be better in it.
 
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Also can we talk about how she started getting off while looking at herself in the mirror? Is that a narcissistic thing? Maybe she’s bi? It poses some real questions in itself.
I assumed that she wasn't getting off to herself in the mirror, but was getting off to imagining/picturing herself having sex
 
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"I got work stuff to do now, kthxbai"
intense schlick sesh

So the alarm on her watch was actually for her alone time? You go, boss-san.

Grinding instead of grinding 8D;

Post nut clarity turned to post not productivity would be a thing, i feel like one youtube channel i used to watch summarized an article about 'sex breaks' (well, going home and not like, hooking up with coworkers) but idk how well you could implement that
 

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