Onaji Class no Senpai - Oneshot

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So the first few pages seem to have text put in the wrong bubbles in quite a few cases, making it a confusing read. there's also a few cases where the pronouns are wrong. It's a good attempt at translation though, and a nice oneshot
 
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The dialogues are very confusing. Couldn't tell who's talking and there were like couple of repeats of dialogue.
 
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This was a cute story. I'm glad I got to read it in English, but I encourage you to get a better understanding of how to translate manga before uploading anything... If you're duplicating text or are uncertain about what significant portions of dialogue say, it's best not to try translating and posting it.
 
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Ooooo
Ignoring the errors others have pointed out

Very interesting, so post established while keeping it secret huh?
Yes with a wonderful dynamic spawned from it, I love it so
Very cute as one shots be

I am revitalized ready for more and more Yuri
Have a nice day
 

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