Tensei Shitara Joban de Shinu Chuu-Boss datta - Heroine Kenzokuka de Ikinokoru - Vol. 8 Ch. 24

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Release nuuuuuuut
Is Mangadex gonna give this manga the ban hammer? I think they were just deleting hentai, but they might eventually come after erotic stuff with lolis like this.
What you on about? MD still has (literal) butt-tons of hentai. Did you forgot to toggle the cum filter on?
 
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Is Mangadex gonna give this manga the ban hammer? I think they were just deleting hentai, but they might eventually come after erotic stuff with lolis like this.
I have a feeling the ones you are thinking of that have gotten removed, there were issues with licensing or the uploader.
 
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She is the healer, not really a dps, and there was all those guards that were injured. Logic would dictate she would focus on healing them and to get more people into the fight over fighting herself.
But yeah also avoiding orgasm.
She was busy trying to not orgasm herself into a demon.
So firstly a healing “spell” is still a spell and she did not fire one. Yes I know she’s a healer that’s why I called her a sainte (Grunch). Logic would dictate that the healing would be shown but the showing that we got was by the succubus throwing out her lust-buff spell.
Secondarily it would behoove the story and the tension to show her attempting to fire one off but having trouble due to the effects YET, if you actually look at there during the pages she appears, there seems to be no indication of a struggle at all. When the soldiers were taken down, they were not being healed; when the heroes were being pressed, they were not being buffed; whenever we see the sainte she looks determined and focused on the enemy ahead: THUS my point is reinforced.
 
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So firstly a healing “spell” is still a spell and she did not fire one. Yes I know she’s a healer that’s why I called her a sainte (Grunch). Logic would dictate that the healing would be shown but the showing that we got was by the succubus throwing out her lust-buff spell.
Secondarily it would behoove the story and the tension to show her attempting to fire one off but having trouble due to the effects YET, if you actually look at there during the pages she appears, there seems to be no indication of a struggle at all. When the soldiers were taken down, they were not being healed; when the heroes were being pressed, they were not being buffed; whenever we see the sainte she looks determined and focused on the enemy ahead: THUS my point is reinforced.
Not shown doesn't mean not happening. The party was trying actively to buy time for the soldiers to recover and ether rejoin the fight or get clear. the screen time and focus was on the hero though. The healers main job is healing, her focusing on the wounded makes total sense, yes it could have been shown, but your outrage is wild. At multiple points there is progress in their recovery before the charm spell, your just asuming a healer had no hand in that.
 
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Boomrang? Why is it now "dragon quest" reference? :dogkek: :glee:

Even the effect is same. (It allows you to hit all monsters in SAME GROUP (species). )
 
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Not shown doesn't mean not happening. The party was trying actively to buy time for the soldiers to recover and ether rejoin the fight or get clear. the screen time and focus was on the hero though. The healers main job is healing, her focusing on the wounded makes total sense, yes it could have been shown, but your outrage is wild. At multiple points there is progress in their recovery before the charm spell, your just asuming a healer had no hand in that.
“Outrage”, not only are you writing for the author you’re writing for the poster. If it’s not shown, that’s bad storytelling because they took a clear amount of time to establish what her problem would be and we also know that in the story it’s important to the plan of our main character. You ARE assuming the healer had a hand in it because you’re making up stuff that isn’t present and that’s not good. When nothing is there nothing can be made of it, but the difference is that in my post I at least gave examples of what is shown, you are talking about what you think makes sense.
A basic aspect of writing is "incident and consequence”: there is something that happens (incident) and then something results from that (consequence) but the reason those words are used is because the nuance tends towards tension or conflict. In these chapters we were give incident but no consequence whatsoever. To illustrate, I can give you some examples of practically the same beats but actually showing consequence, all of them have the base incident of Sainte being given the lustful boost:


1. When the demons blow up the army the first time, they are hit with a huge area heal that surprises the hero. ‘Wow that was amazing! What did you do?!’ She turns to look at the Sainte, but the panel showing the Sainte from the hero’s perspective shows her on her hands and knees and shivering. Demons resurge and hit another blow up, Hero looks to Sainte, but they are now more collapsed and shivering harder. Succubus shows up and casts her lust buff and the fight comes out as the same.
In this case we can see how the lust is affecting the Sainte because from the hero’s perspective, she cast an unusually strong heal spell and is overcome by the exhaustion, but we know it’s actually the lust which “technically” made her stronger but the erotic effect is clear. Focus is still on hero; storybeats are effectively the same; four panels are used.

2. After the demons blow up the army, Hero says ‘Gather your strength! Fiore get them some help!’ she replies ‘Uh.. hn- Yes! Protect the wounded!’ Fight continues and then at one point we move to Sainte’s POV, she is healing the wounded soldiers one after another as her eyes twitch and she bites her lip, it’s clear the lust is taking effect but she seems to manage as she heals the last soldier in front of her. But then she turns around... there are DOZENS more. One falls and she heals on instinct but her knees wobble. Another reaches out to her and she heals but lets out a moan. Seeing that soldiers are being healed many heads turn and their weary battle-raveged hands and eyes reach out to her as the Sainte’s expression begins to turn somewhat feverish, and through the throng we see Ricola smiling. Cue her calling their attention and then going, ‘You’re still good to go right? Get it up!’ Story continues as written.
We get a small cutaway scene that shows the progressive effect of the magic, the willingness of Fiore to continue despite the effects, her reaction at being ‘overwhelmed’ and that Ricola is keeping an eye on her implying “things are going to plan”. Would take about 4-5 pages depending on the paneling/page choices.

3. Change practically from what is already written and shown except her expression/stability of body and replace a few characters to show that throughout the battle her condition is progressively becoming untenable in order to insinuate that she has to have been at least exerting herself somewhere, since the incident stated [random stats boost => become horny]. Notably: Ch24, pg16, bottom right panel, replace healer with fiore and change dialogue; Ch24, pg17, top panel, replace healer in smoke with fiore; Ch24, pg28, far left panel, and shiver lines/blush/flushed expression to Fiore, Ch24, pg29, top panel, match expression on Fiore from previous page; Ch24, pg38, top middle panel, add minor blush and slightly changed expression to Fiore; Ch24, pg39, middle panel, match expression from previous page add 1-2 more smal sweat beads to differentiate from others in panel; Same edit pg43.
If you actually look at these images and pages without seeing the way that the Sainte was looking/acting just prior to the fight, any reader would be unable to ascertain that she was under any sort of effect because of her infrequent appearance and completely matching the minor duress indications of the other supporting characters.


Not shown means not happening when there is no indication whatsoever, and she has NO indication. Plus in my edits I actually inserted Fiore firing off a healing spell i.e. showing that she could be understood to be back with the soldiers at any given point in the fight. If that was there you might have had a point, but sadly (Grunch).
 
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“Outrage”, not only are you writing for the author you’re writing for the poster. If it’s not shown, that’s bad storytelling because they took a clear amount of time to establish what her problem would be and we also know that in the story it’s important to the plan of our main character. You ARE assuming the healer had a hand in it because you’re making up stuff that isn’t present and that’s not good. When nothing is there nothing can be made of it, but the difference is that in my post I at least gave examples of what is shown, you are talking about what you think makes sense.
A basic aspect of writing is "incident and consequence”: there is something that happens (incident) and then something results from that (consequence) but the reason those words are used is because the nuance tends towards tension or conflict. In these chapters we were give incident but no consequence whatsoever. To illustrate, I can give you some examples of practically the same beats but actually showing consequence, all of them have the base incident of Sainte being given the lustful boost:


1. When the demons blow up the army the first time, they are hit with a huge area heal that surprises the hero. ‘Wow that was amazing! What did you do?!’ She turns to look at the Sainte, but the panel showing the Sainte from the hero’s perspective shows her on her hands and knees and shivering. Demons resurge and hit another blow up, Hero looks to Sainte, but they are now more collapsed and shivering harder. Succubus shows up and casts her lust buff and the fight comes out as the same.
In this case we can see how the lust is affecting the Sainte because from the hero’s perspective, she cast an unusually strong heal spell and is overcome by the exhaustion, but we know it’s actually the lust which “technically” made her stronger but the erotic effect is clear. Focus is still on hero; storybeats are effectively the same; four panels are used.

2. After the demons blow up the army, Hero says ‘Gather your strength! Fiore get them some help!’ she replies ‘Uh.. hn- Yes! Protect the wounded!’ Fight continues and then at one point we move to Sainte’s POV, she is healing the wounded soldiers one after another as her eyes twitch and she bites her lip, it’s clear the lust is taking effect but she seems to manage as she heals the last soldier in front of her. But then she turns around... there are DOZENS more. One falls and she heals on instinct but her knees wobble. Another reaches out to her and she heals but lets out a moan. Seeing that soldiers are being healed many heads turn and their weary battle-raveged hands and eyes reach out to her as the Sainte’s expression begins to turn somewhat feverish, and through the throng we see Ricola smiling. Cue her calling their attention and then going, ‘You’re still good to go right? Get it up!’ Story continues as written.
We get a small cutaway scene that shows the progressive effect of the magic, the willingness of Fiore to continue despite the effects, her reaction at being ‘overwhelmed’ and that Ricola is keeping an eye on her implying “things are going to plan”. Would take about 4-5 pages depending on the paneling/page choices.

3. Change practically from what is already written and shown except her expression/stability of body and replace a few characters to show that throughout the battle her condition is progressively becoming untenable in order to insinuate that she has to have been at least exerting herself somewhere, since the incident stated [random stats boost => become horny]. Notably: Ch24, pg16, bottom right panel, replace healer with fiore and change dialogue; Ch24, pg17, top panel, replace healer in smoke with fiore; Ch24, pg28, far left panel, and shiver lines/blush/flushed expression to Fiore, Ch24, pg29, top panel, match expression on Fiore from previous page; Ch24, pg38, top middle panel, add minor blush and slightly changed expression to Fiore; Ch24, pg39, middle panel, match expression from previous page add 1-2 more smal sweat beads to differentiate from others in panel; Same edit pg43.
If you actually look at these images and pages without seeing the way that the Sainte was looking/acting just prior to the fight, any reader would be unable to ascertain that she was under any sort of effect because of her infrequent appearance and completely matching the minor duress indications of the other supporting characters.


Not shown means not happening when there is no indication whatsoever, and she has NO indication. Plus in my edits I actually inserted Fiore firing off a healing spell i.e. showing that she could be understood to be back with the soldiers at any given point in the fight. If that was there you might have had a point, but sadly (Grunch).
Holly freaking crap your mental.
“Outrage”, not only are you writing for the author you’re writing for the poster.
Then writes a entire fan fic
You ARE assuming the healer had a hand in it because you’re making up stuff that isn’t present and that’s not good
Not shown means not happening when there is no indication whatsoever, and she has NO indication
You deciding arbitrary what happened is making stuff up. They literally give out orders, and talk about healing the knights recover. A healer healing the knights is right in line with that battle plan. yet.
NO indication


But lets cut the nonsense. You are just pissy that you didn't see her squirming trying to cast and are throwing a tantrum about it, and are just pretending its about good storytelling or that its bad writing. It will probably cut back to her but your just raging because what you wanted wasn't shown.
 
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Was it just me or were there a lot of recycled panels from last chapter?
This manga has been weird about that. Quite a lot of recap pages in a few chapters. You see this more with doujinshi, which more often they do oneshots and then it gets a follow up much later, more uncertainty of if it will continue. This was clearly geared to be a story, but I wonder if the artist is more used to doujinshi publishing.
 
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Holly freaking crap your mental.

Then writes a entire fan fic


You deciding arbitrary what happened is making stuff up. They literally give out orders, and talk about healing the knights recover. A healer healing the knights is right in line with that battle plan. yet.



But lets cut the nonsense. You are just pissy that you didn't see her squirming trying to cast and are throwing a tantrum about it, and are just pretending its about good storytelling or that its bad writing. It will probably cut back to her but your just raging because what you wanted wasn't shown.
I write and edit erotic fiction and games it’s my hobby and, no, being able to understand what is happening based on what is in the text is not making stuff up.

When you say “they literally give out orders” and talk about healing the knights, we see a different healer doing that but still not the Sainte. You literally just made things up by arbitrarily deciding what is happening. It’s good when incident and consequence are used because it adds to the story so when one half of the formula is missing, it's obvious to point it out.

There’s a strange way you have of projecting emotions through things: just because I make good points you can’t respond to, doesn’t mean I’m angry. No one is ‘pissy’, but you might be based on the way you seem to be responding.
1. Cutting back happens in tandem with action, you mean flashback.
2. That’s also bad writing in terms of “this thing was totally happening without any indication to support it”.

It’s fine to like something even when it’s badly done or conveyed, I still like this story, but you don’t have to keep acting like you made any good points.
 
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Fuck, the hero really went beserk!
nicely done hero.

LMAO AT THE GUYS GETTING BUFFED!
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Bugs/exploits aside I wonder if other games/series would have weapons merging as a concept

Is Mangadex gonna give this manga the ban hammer? I think they were just deleting hentai, but they might eventually come after erotic stuff with lolis like this.

Well, hunlight does have its own site idk how many ppl go there tho

Lmao imagine if this got animated , what va do you wanna hear say "get it up/thrust " in a cutesy voice =w=
 

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