Mizu Zokusei no Mahoutsukai - Ch. 40

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Wow the quality of the work, is all over the place (not the translation), columns are copied pasted, some environments are photo bashed and the characters are hand drawn so sloppily lol it's been a while since i read this, and wow.
 
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That close up of the very rough drawing of the scrolls in page 12-13 are so painful to look at...
 
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Man! Who the hell is this hack of an artist? Got an official English translation to boot.
 
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The translation in general isn't bad, but there are some seriously glaring flaws. Firstly, nearly every use of pronouns is incorrect. The female princess is referred to with male pronouns, while the male Oscar is referred to with female pronouns. There are also several times when third person is used when it should be first person, or the opposite happens. Chapter 38 ends with Ryou correctly saying "Now it's my turn," and chapter 39 begins with him saying the exact same line, except now he's saying "Now it's our turn." Which is incorrect.

Also, it's the town of Lune, not the town of Run.
 
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Been a while since I read this. Tempted to go back to the web novel version. Bookmarked the chapter, but is so far into the story, no idea if I'd remember enough. Do remember that this version cut out things, like his fight against fish in the ocean (made a brief mention of it during the time he was trying out water jets to move around).

Thank you for continuing the series.

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The web novel is pretty well labeled, but this is chapter 83.
 
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just recently finished the anime. i kinda like the art style of the anime more and it fleshens out alot of details the manga just skipped, which feels rather refreshing, since often it's the opposite. anyways, that got me into reading this, so i'm quite pleased to see we're closing in on where the anime stopped. thanks a bunch for the chapters. :3
 
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maybe I will stick to the novel... I forgot how ass the "art" has become and it was barely there to begin with. now the translations are now starting to match 🤢
 

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