Well, isn't this just dangerously wholesome and adorable-looking? Love the art, vibe, and characters so far. Thanks for bringing us this series!
Isn't it always the shit we say the most carelessly that winds up scarring people?
Skip if you don't want feedback: I only say this because your work is professional-looking enough to critique - your script just needs a little proofreading for grammar and flow. Otherwise very nice!