Isekai Tensei Reijou, Shuppon Suru
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I mean it's only 2 chaps so can't tell much but quite nice so far
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Well if you want generic fluff this might be alright?
There isn't that much yet but generally you can tell how good a series is going to be right off the bat by how well thought out the setting is, and this isn't thought out at all.
The beginning starts out with a Cinderella story and our protagonist is the only child by blood of the original house, her father married in matrillineally and is alive while the mother is dead. Inheritance laws should be front and center here but there has been 0 explanation how an outsider managed to become the house head instead of the daughter.
Main character gets to choose her skills using points right at the start and from the prices that we see she goes over her cap by like 50%.
Main character later steals all assets in just the mansion, and author treats that as all the wealth of the entire noble family, ignoring stuff like strategic resources like mines, land, other villas, lines of credit with merchants, bank systems etc. rich people don't keep all their money in their mattress.
Magic is a handwave without rules that can do basically anything. Main character instantly duplicates a copy of keys using baseline "everyday magic". She created matter from nothing, this probably won't come up again but she can just duplicated gold until she's Mansa Musa.
Investigators (actually probably the author) are unable to figure out basic timelines for creating a story. Main character goes missing and presumed dead for weeks before the mansion is robbed, the investigators have all this data and assume that she got kidnapped during the robbery when she went missing weeks before that event.
Oh and main character fires an arrow with enough force to cause explosions clearing tree lines and her target, a wolf, is somehow in tact and her recoil was basically just rolling backwards.
Maybe it's alright but you definitely have to turn your brain off for this and not take it seriously.
There isn't that much yet but generally you can tell how good a series is going to be right off the bat by how well thought out the setting is, and this isn't thought out at all.
The beginning starts out with a Cinderella story and our protagonist is the only child by blood of the original house, her father married in matrillineally and is alive while the mother is dead. Inheritance laws should be front and center here but there has been 0 explanation how an outsider managed to become the house head instead of the daughter.
Main character gets to choose her skills using points right at the start and from the prices that we see she goes over her cap by like 50%.
Main character later steals all assets in just the mansion, and author treats that as all the wealth of the entire noble family, ignoring stuff like strategic resources like mines, land, other villas, lines of credit with merchants, bank systems etc. rich people don't keep all their money in their mattress.
Magic is a handwave without rules that can do basically anything. Main character instantly duplicates a copy of keys using baseline "everyday magic". She created matter from nothing, this probably won't come up again but she can just duplicated gold until she's Mansa Musa.
Investigators (actually probably the author) are unable to figure out basic timelines for creating a story. Main character goes missing and presumed dead for weeks before the mansion is robbed, the investigators have all this data and assume that she got kidnapped during the robbery when she went missing weeks before that event.
Oh and main character fires an arrow with enough force to cause explosions clearing tree lines and her target, a wolf, is somehow in tact and her recoil was basically just rolling backwards.
Maybe it's alright but you definitely have to turn your brain off for this and not take it seriously.
Its weird the magic weapons are so powerful. Even though she didnt take any normal offensive skills her storage skill is amazing, enough to be use offensively. Like storing a boulder than releasing it on top of her enemies. could be powerful if used correctly.
Hmmmm , in the vein of 'isekaied into a slow life' them its alright, but reaching that point the MC speed runs the answers to all her initial problems with almost no explanation (beyond a short foodnote for the storage ability) it just is needed for a scene and its there and it works, the end.
I think if you can get past the.....frankly horrendous story, the 'slow life as a OP little girl in a isekai' might be okay to pass the time with.
I think if you can get past the.....frankly horrendous story, the 'slow life as a OP little girl in a isekai' might be okay to pass the time with.
A lot of times there are rules. Here there are no rules.
Strip someone naked instantly, there's no real defense. God says it's a cheat, yes it is.
Similar to magically digging a hole under someone (I've seen that twice), because it can store living people, you store the person, then take them out naked 300 ft in the air and let them fall.
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I'm quite hooked with the story for now especially it has a FMC. An OP(?) one also. BUT! BUT BUT!! The fact that there's is a possibility of romance even though it's not tagged as one makes me rate it lower. I hate when stories like this especially when it has a FMC as lead was being paired with either a prince or a knight or something. I do hope the author won't pair the FMC with a Prince for FCK SAKE!
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Can't believe you listed all this but not the "fella in charge of souls made an oopsie," which is already quite a big red flag by itself, but the story even followed up with "fella in charge of souls wishes you a fun and happy life before reincarnating you into the body of a neglected, malnourished, abused, and half-dead child of all people"
