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Just when it was getting good...
oh, i missed that one, thanks for the heads up.Page 24 has some issues with the spelling. Do you need any help with proofreading or quality checks?
fixed.Page 4, bottom left - They originally -> Then originally
Page 6, left panel - Does the hero's bloodline -> Is the hero's
Page 20, bottom panel - Wide-area detection works poorl -> poorly
Also page 24 left panel, the phrasing is a bit weird.
If you need help proofreading and quality checking, send a dm. I can assist if you need it.fixed.
i am very sorry...
also can you tell me more which one on page 24?
i will in time i need it.If you need help proofreading and quality checking, send a dm. I can assist if you need it.
Maybe your right but personally I think she was already down and feeling guilty, it’s clear she has some feelings for him but they are both kinda clueless with this and haven’t even acknowledged it yet![]()
lol He got caught thinking of other women, look at Ely's face. No wonder she was aggressive in the next pages.
JellyEly is so cute.
The sentence is "The party behind her is probably made up of advanced classes for more than half its member". For some reason, either I am not able to comprehend it well or the phrasing appears to be a bit weird.fixed.
i am very sorry...
also can you tell me more which one on page 24?
Yeah, she's more like she can feel it but hasn't learned of this kind of affection. But she is a bit sharp despite being clueless about love.Maybe your right but personally I think she was already down and feeling guilty, it’s clear she has some feelings for him but they are both kinda clueless with this and haven’t even acknowledged it yet
maybe the "for more than half its member" sounds weird.The sentence is "The party behind her is probably made up of advanced classes for more than half its member". For some reason, either I am not able to comprehend it well or the phrasing appears to be a bit weird.