Tayutau Koi no Chirigiwa ni - Ch. 6 - That Side of You

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I honestly couldn't careless about Nako, I just need more Suzuran and Emma (and some of the stuco kouhai), but hopefully Nako's arc won't get dragged out for more than a few chapter and author keep it short.
 
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15: "she said... that time", mangled sentence. Maybe move it, "She said that time that she has never been to karaoke." Or "She said last time", if accurate.

"would have been new", may not wrong, but "would be" sounds better.
 
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this needs either editing or an actual proof reading pass. stuff like "Alright then, senpai..." immediately followed by "Happy birthday, senpai!~" doesn't read like english so much as it does a poor tl and it immediately takes me out of what i'm reading and ruins the entire experience
 
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Even if this follows the normal manga romance trajectory of them not officially dating until the end, I always like stories like these where they get somewhat intimate before officially dating. Feels a little more real.

Also, omg, Emma in a realistic scenario this is similar to what I would do as well but it always leads to pain.
 
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suzuran needs a friend to tell her she isn't in the wrong and that she should stop apologizing

i'm interested in knowing whether suzuran will end up with emma big alien had or go to sad rout (sad for you, guys, for me is happy route)
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After the initial set up feeling a bit more toxic and manipulative, this is coming off more wholesome than I thought. Not complaining at all though. Their relationship still isn't fully wholesome and there is some lying and half truths involved, but I like that Emma isn't just being like "I gotta take her heartbreak to my advantage to get together with her" but she genuinely cares about Suzuran and actually having a positive effect on her.
 
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this needs either editing or an actual proof reading pass. stuff like "Alright then, senpai..." immediately followed by "Happy birthday, senpai!~" doesn't read like english so much as it does a poor tl and it immediately takes me out of what i'm reading and ruins the entire experience
Many things have been fixed, I apologize
 

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