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You forgot the last word in the first bubble - "villain/scoundrel", and it feels like pronouns are once again not fully correct, although i can see why you had trouble with these lines - it's really hard to tell when Asclay talks about himself, the whole team, contract or Forn (though, the "villain/scoundrel" is most likely directed at Forn, as Asclay is using "
koitsu"). While the phrases seem to be translated correctly (mostly), they just don't seems to make much sense in context.
The best i can come up myself with is:
If we use this [contract], and still won't achieve anything, then she's nothing but a scoundrel!
For every dead person we should save a town, only then can I truly face those who have passed away.
Or maybe:
Only by saving the town, bigger than the number of the dead,...
Still confusing...
And, next panel - i think Asclay is asking Forn that
she should show "as much resolve" (she's being forced into contract, after all).