Hiiragi-chan to Tomikawa-chan - Ch. 85 - A Choice

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The most interesting part of the story is the character progression of the author, who went from
"My first big work is an exploration of a weird friendship-turned romance between two deeply hurt, deeply broken people" to "My second big work answers the question of what it's like to date an absolutely ENORMOUS BITCH with a pair of boobs big enough to feed half of Japan".
I suppose at some point you start to crave the simple, happy simplicity of happy-romance-with-big-women. Very relatable.
 
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The most interesting part of the story is the character progression of the author, who went from
"My first big work is an exploration of a weird friendship-turned romance between two deeply hurt, deeply broken people" to "My second big work answers the question of what it's like to date an absolutely ENORMOUS BITCH with a pair of boobs big enough to feed half of Japan".
I suppose at some point you start to crave the simple, happy simplicity of happy-romance-with-big-women. Very relatable.
should we call this the "these bitches are too damn depressing, I need to write something happy go lucky to counteract this" pipeline?
 
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I remember thinking it’s strange that Tomikawa has blond hair in such a strict household, while also trying to be loved by her mother. But I guess it was one of many attempts to get her mother’s attention, and maybe someone else’s too. Or perhaps, at some point, she gave in and did something she hadn’t dared to do before, since it wouldn't have made her situation any worse anyway.. Might be both.
 
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The most interesting part of the story is the character progression of the author, who went from
"My first big work is an exploration of a weird friendship-turned romance between two deeply hurt, deeply broken people" to "My second big work answers the question of what it's like to date an absolutely ENORMOUS BITCH with a pair of boobs big enough to feed half of Japan".
I suppose at some point you start to crave the simple, happy simplicity of happy-romance-with-big-women. Very relatable.
yeah, I think it’s like doing multiple things you like, juggling them to make work less monotone and not get tired with any, still hilarious contrast
 
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Idk which one I'm gonna cry for coz clearly Hiiragi isn't even in her "line of sight"
Along with "it's irresponsible of you" And with "you think i better off alone" Dialogue

Like... Who's in front of you huh?, a manekin?

Bitch that's your best friend
Yeah, I don't know how she goes and got here after listening to Hiiragi's warning, which is make sense why she'd give that warning because of what she was told and what she saw herself
 
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Yeah, I don't know how she goes and got here after listening to Hiiragi's warning, which is make sense why she'd give that warning because of what she was told and what she saw herself
Honestly a good writing man, she have trigger word that send her to anxiety in a second, and how that anxiety make her ignore important people around here

Which if continue will resulting of her being alone again (which is the source of her trauma)
 

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If Shuukura was very subtextual in how broken these girls are, and how much they need each other, this one just punches you in the gut over and over again until you understand. Dear God this hurts.
 
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The fact that Hiiragi sees through Tomikawa's facade kind of makes this reaction worse. Like Hiiragi suspects but whe can't know. She can't know what years of being ignored have done to Tomikawa.
And it's heartbreaking to see the results of that.
 
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Now Hiiragi has to help Tomikawa through her attack. Also. I'm absolutely blaming her brothers. Fuck them for just leaving her on her own.
 

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