Doro no Hana - Oneshot

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I was going to ask if there were some missing pages, but I see now.

...welp.

I guess that happened.
 
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It was a pilot chapter. Get in the top 3 for likes in your batch, get serialized. It did not, so no serialization.
I mean it's not like it sets up an interesting story. Just feels like a chapter is missing. Understandable that it didn't finish top 3. Thanks for the explanation.

That aside, who leaves a mechanical lift in the air, and what kind of company doesn't have barricades for fall hazards? Not only is the scenario unrealistic the blame would easily fall at least half on the company.
 
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yeah, no. I have read multiple one shots, and mangas where they have the one shot as chaper 0, and while they don't have to be self conlcusive, at least it gives you a general idea of where the story wants to go. This one is way too vague for that, like I was hoping for her to say something like "I am here BECAUSE you killed him" it is still vague, but at least it confirms she has porpuse rather than just being there to take it.
I don't want to be mean, but if it realy was a try for a serialization, I can see why it wasn't picked up
 
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yeah, no. I have read multiple one shots, and mangas where they have the one shot as chaper 0, and while they don't have to be self conlcusive, at least it gives you a general idea of where the story wants to go. This one is way too vague for that, like I was hoping for her to say something like "I am here BECAUSE you killed him" it is still vague, but at least it confirms she has porpuse rather than just being there to take it.
I don't want to be mean, but if it realy was a try for a serialization, I can see why it wasn't picked up
Let's be honest, the plot probably involved her being there serving him as a gesture of gratitude towards him, since he had killed her father because he had done horrible things, or something like that.
 
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That's it?! There has to be more to the story!
We don't even know why she chose to live with him??
 
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Let's be honest, the plot probably involved her being there serving him as a gesture of gratitude towards him, since he had killed her father because he had done horrible things, or something like that.
Probably a twisted mix, seeing as she's just letting him rot and suffer in his guilt. She's getting revenge, but at the same time taking care of him. I've seen a bunch of mangas where it was that twisted sense of gratitude and hatred.
 

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