I will fix it when I come back from work.Page 7 has a typo.
The grammar is off, & the tenses are mismatched.
- "Thanks to Mayumi-sama for teaching me," & "I have getting better at skiing.", in the top panel.
It would be more correct & flow better for the bubbles to state:
- "Thanks to Mayumi-sama teaching me," & "I've gotten better at skiing!".
Possibly some more past trauma there given her reaction when trying to remember their faces. I hope not though, making an already heavy backstory even worse.Wow, her parents suck so fucking much
Abandoning your child just 'cause she lost her memories after getting into an accident? Did you even love your child?![]()
CHILD NO LONGER FUNCTION IN HIVE SOCIETYWow, her parents suck so fucking much
Abandoning your child just 'cause she lost her memories after getting into an accident? Did you even love your child?![]()