The laundry list of other issues aside, the pacing is clealry set by a crack-addict!
How the fuck you gonna jump from introducing the 2nd main girl in one chapter, marrying her the next (if an arena battle even counts as a marriage ceremony) in the next, then immediately timeskipping a year, where both wives give birth, in the final 2 pages??
Hard drop. I want back the 30 minutes of my life I spent reading through these 17 chapters