Tsuki wa Hitsuji o Kazoenai - Vol. 3 Ch. 16 - The Place

[MangaDex]

 

[hythae]

a fine example of wat authors should really stop doing.
creating the most braindead events to lead up to a momentous event. cuz it completely ruins it.

 

[BreadBunny]

can't fault Laticia for shooting her shot lmao. This is the one moment where they could just disappear together.

 

[UdenEmpati]

a fine example of wat authors should really stop doing.
creating the most braindead events to lead up to a momentous event. cuz it completely ruins it.

Definitely doesn't help that the third volume is so rushed. Characters introduced as plot devices instead of people, and pacing like it's trying to squeeze a book into every chapter to hit all the required storybeats.

I have to imagine something like this could have worked with adequate breathing room in the narrative, but sadly it reads like the editor pulled the plug, or something, after the second novel.

 

[Yuri_Enjoyer_Deluxe]

Well girlie... ITS SHOWTIIIIIIME!

Also W scam

 

[BrotherCoa]

Wtf...

Are you girl serious? The guy just opens a door to nowhere and you hop in like that? I know of lazy writing but this has to take the cake. How stupid you have to be to just listen to him, while perfectly knowing that his little sister see you as a rival?

At least we know that bro is really a massive siscon.

 

[Vaudevillian]

Again with this shit, author? You can draw well, but you can't write for shit. This series is literally just Anemone again, just with a different coat of paint.

 

[Gentlecat]

How are we getting to chapter 23, this is written like the author was told "you have until chapter 18 to finish the story"

 

[NilnisNilneef]

Warping in the side character to get rejected is diabolical.

 

[Baffled]

I like her. She's really cute and has the balls
And I also wouldn't be against such route, but oh well

 

[slimenora]

this author should really just stick to fluff i guess, this was all so contrived...

 

[Kitsune_115]

Hmmm someone I wasn't expecting shoot their shoot? Okay?

 

[ScherryNights]

Oh, okay then. I won’t express my view of the story. Others in the comments echo my sentiment.

What I’ll say instead is to please give Leticia a cute girlfriend by the end. She deserves everything!