Not sure is it my attention span was quite decreased or not since what I read today was nothing different from previous ones (epub WN that scraped from Novelpia or elsewhere), but I can't focus on it. The approach on this one writing is quite much. The author loves to expand the narrative and shorten the character dialogue. I mean, it's not a bad approach, but the author really need to learn how to balance them. There's no prohibition on prefer a technique but learning to balance between those two is important for a writer.
Or maybe just my attention span that was really fucked up? Dunno lol
there's really never something that can fulfill your mouth unless the dust (death)
Note: for everyone wondering, there's quote like this: "Human will having a mountain of gold yet he still wanted another mountain. After he had two mountain of golds, he will be still wanted another mountain. There's nothing can reallly make their mouth (greediness) satisfied unless the dirt (death)."


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