Do you guys see Fujimiya's reaction and face after priest said something to her? Maybe that priest ordered Fujimiya to get rid of Kanata since he's outsider?
Can you keep japanese honorifics? Like "Izou-san" or "Oryou-san" or "Ciel-sama" (I don't remember which honorifics did Akiha call Ciel)
Most of (Fate) fans used to these (Japanese) honorifics.
Translation of final page:
- Mori: Hey Master, this is my Will (Requiem)!
- "Shinji": Get disappear, quick!
[Oni Musashi's Will] (which is skill 3 in FGO)