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It's stupid, underwhelming, but enjoyable. I can't wait for more.

When I got to the last page I thought that guy was some stupid bandit about to get his shit pushed, then I read the page.

Pretty funny, not super hilarious, but pretty funny.

This is goddamn hilarious xD

Nie Li at the end "Huh, who would have thouht?" Me " YES! WHO WOULD HAVE THOUGHT! WHO WOULD HAVE THOUGHT THAT YOU WOULD MAKE YOUR FAMILY THE CENTER OF ATTENTION!"

I don't know about anyone else but this chapter seems to lack some proofreading :T

I love it <3

I'm glad the old man got more than one last wish granted ;-;

@Mogima Seeing as its just a quote from a show it should be fine, I mean, you did just say it. Not like the writes, produces or anything like that are scoping out sites all over for people making quotes. Also, NEVER! I Shant nary loose slack to anyone! I mean, unless its rope to save lives. Oh...

thats not how glasses work. that's not how glasses work! That's not how glasses work! That's Not How Glasses Work! THAT'S NOT HOW GLASSES WORK!!!!! You Don't Just Put Glasses On And Your Vision Is Spontaneously Better! You Have To Get Corrective Lenses And Frames That Fit! Glasses Are Not One...

@Mogima I'm not saying you messed up the Bender reference, but...

Are we not going to address the Asgore and Toriel shaped statue at the beginning of the chapter or...?

@Kaarme the MC to Maou no Hajimekata doesn't hate guys, he hates love dovey couples.

@azorth with that alone I am convinced that she has a father complex that she is getting out by using him since he looks like her dad.

@kuroneko66 I think this might be more of a question of what ties does this make and how they work? I'm guessing her magic element is the tie and how that works is that makes her effectively a princess that could end up tying two royal families together should the marriage go through and the...

Okay... She totally fell on purpose just so she could go, "Oh, my Hero!" Totally betting on it! She in for the D

Please get a proofreader and editor.

I 100 per-fucking-cent need more <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

I have no idea or clue about what is going on in chapter 0 and have no idea what to expect from the following chapters. I can't wait to read more.

My heart ;-;