Seems good enough translation.
As long it's proofread enough to be readable in english that's good enough. At least better than the jojo group.
But probably better to contact drow workshop to offer assistance.
Keep going, translator. You're basically an oasis for this manga, since no other group even bother picking this up yet. At least you can generate attention for the manga.
Big oof for leviatan scans
https://skscans.com/comics/27322-survival-story-of-a-sword-king-in-a-fantasy-world
Sleeping Knights Scans are picking this up.
IDK if they'll post to Mangadex tho, so here's their site.
my wife shows signs of possession now that the duke holds his wife dearly now
In the overall progress of their relationship, the change make sense from having him addressing her from 'wife' to 'my wife'
A slight change to convey the duke's feelings
@tesla Crosswalk light was green, there was a light indicating it was the bottom light that was on, not the top.
But yeah, MC still acting cringe despite semi realizing the reality he's in.