I get what you're going for with the dialect, but I don't think it really lands properly.
Also, I hope the author intends for the arguments of captain bodypart-stealer to be comparable to a poor man's MCU Thanos, because he's just as incorrect about everything as that tosser. It has a similar...
This is an unapologetically trashy story, and there's a place for that, thinly written as it is, but the translation isn't doing the writing that is there any favors.
This is interesting, I wonder if having those powers for an extended period will eventually affect Mars' base form.
At the very least, the mentor knows more than she's telling.
Holy fuck I am gay, those character designs for the two mafia boss ladies are both so goddamn good, I do not know which I would rather be and which I would rather date. ^^;
Man, it must be fun living in a fantasy world like you.
Cops exist to shoot poor people, they do not give a shit about people being douchebags to any kind of minorities.
No Girls Love in the tags... but I have a hunch there will be some yuri fanservice at least. Comedy series or not, this story is already far from chaste.