The art doesn't bother me, if anything, it goes to show the important parts of the scene, and I can appreciate it, thanks for bringing this to us, guys.
I don't remember the last time I've been so into something, except for Looking Up to Magical Girls, of course, but other than that I can't think of anything that makes me drop what I'm doing and read. Thanks for taking this back and staying with it, to yuri!