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Page 9, panel 2, it should be "stroke of luck", not "struck of luck".

What a tweest!

Page 3 last panel, I think maybe you meant "contempt" instead of "content"? It doesn't really sound like a bad thing for city folk to view the country as a source of content. It's also a grammatically incorrect sentence.

Yay, more of this.

Time for seggs? :meguupog:Also go away creepy stalker!

YES IT'S BACK.

A few mistakes to correct. Page 14 should be "they're" not "their" in panel 2. Also your note at the end, it's pages you have "access" to. "Excess" means you have too much of something.

Nah man, she slept with her brother. You can't just pull a normal ending and expect us to accept this as a serious story. You need to go balls to the wall.

None of these girls will ever confess.

Page 6, I think it should be "She probably", not "They probably". We know he's talking about her, so I don't think it makes sense to use a gender neutral pronoun.

Give it time. I think that Mahiro will become a very good friend of Asahi, given that she has a 0% chance of ever falling for him. Asahi has the problem of never being able to have genuine friendships with girls, due to them always falling for him, so this could become an extremely valuable...

I think the translation on page 26 might be wrong. Shimizu says "Although we're in the same school now", but according to the flashback, they were in the same school before. She was watching him help people around the school. So it doesn't make sense for her to say "we're in the same school  now".

This arc was so stupid. Honestly I think it's been going down hill ever since Satoru and the arsonist arc. The first arcs were good, but now...

He's 100% right about not worrying about minor mistakes. Most important thing is to keep the performance going. If you stop, the audience immediately knows something is wrong. If you keep going, there's a good chance they won't even realise a mistake happened, since they (probably) don't know...

Hahahahahaha too pure despite everything she said.

What a pair of goobers.

C++? I vaguely remember that syntax... I haven't used C++ since university.

Bruh. 😭 Good guy Lancelot protecting his brother and taking on the tasks that need doing...

It's been so long that I need to go reread to remember what's happened in the story. I guess we already kind of knew her parents are overprotective, but this chapter really showed just how much that is the case. Glad she was able to express herself and get a chance to grow.

OK I didn't expect him to wear cosplay to work. Caught me off guard with that one.