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@Robo Typo on page 13: "She ended up need to repeat thought." >> "She ended up needing to repeat thought."

@Shibiririreruwa Typo on page 1: "Oono-san, what rolls are missing?" >> "Oono-san, what roles are missing?" Typo on page 2: "...to be the automoton it's ok..." >> "...to be the automaton it's ok..." Typo on page 3: "Please come our acting coach..." >> "Please come as our acting coach..." or...

@GodricKharg Rephrasing on page 8: "This is to do..." >> "This has to do..."

@Underhacker Typos on page 8: "I musn't hurt them." >> "I mustn't hurt them." "I musn't kill them." >> "I mustn't kill them."

@dangankou Got it. Still, if you need proofreading just send me a message.

@Mr_Detective Typo on page 20: "...the water has been poisened." >> "...the water has been poisoned."

@dangankou Typo on page 2: "Cold-Heartednes" >> "Cold-Heartedness" Edit: while I was re-checking everything, I noticed that on page 2 the missing "s" is there, but since it's too small i couldn't see it at all. Typo on page 6: "I like Kungfu moveis!!" >> "I like Kungfu movies!!" Typo on page 15...

@Zoppy Typo on page 10: "He want you to come..." >> "He wanted you to come..." Typo on page 11: "... your such an airhead." >> "... you're such an airhead."

@Smoof101 @Smoof Typos/Rephrasing needed(?) on page 5: "...than using a nerve this around probably." >> ????????? (no idea) "But the mischief should stick to the harsh traps" >> ????????? (same) Typo on page 7: "...something east to eat." >> "...something easy to eat." Typos/Rephrasing needed(?)...

@Bottersnike no problem!

@Bottersnike Typo on page 1: "...all sorts of creatuers go..." >> "...all sorts of creatures go..." Typo on page 3: "Our skirts fliped!" >> "Our skirts flipped!" Typo on page 4: "...they get to schol!" >> "...they get to school!" Typo on page 5: "...with each oter..." >> "...with each other..."...

@shurim Typo on page 6: "...great power in it's stead!!" >> "...great power in its stead!!"

@SystematicChaos Typo on page 3: "He was completely overloked ..." >> "He was completely overlooked ..."

@bobbyboi Typo on page 1: "... that way permanantly was passed." >> "... that way permanently was passed."

@ditshick Typo on page 22: "... on a returning spere." >> "... on a returning spree."

@Sloth Typo on page 3: "... you devotion...." >> "... your devotion...." @akole I agree, the previous artist was a LOT better.

@Xunder Typo on page 19: "you're mess of a body...." >> "your mess of a body...."

@diegow Typos on page 10: "...why this is hapening?" >> "...why this is happening?" "...to be exagerated too much." >> "...to be exaggerated too much."

@Underhacker Typo on page 19: "My mind doesn't hesisate." >> "My mind doesn't hesitate."

@Psycada Typo on page 3: "You're stange..." >> "You're strange..." Typo on page 16: "...my's son's troubles..." >> "...my son's troubles..."