I 100% believe that this joke of being completely oblivious could work for the series, BUT, it really needed to be done differently. Like they keep sending monsters or other opponents to try and kill her and she keeps overdoing it every time when she believes it’s supposed to be a training...
Other pages the faces look fine, but this last face, which is meant to be the focus, is rough to say the least. If you really can’t see it, idk else what to tell you.
1. Still a dick move on his part. Would be lame to let him off that easy without trying to make up for it.
2. Not to rag on the artist, but what is going on with the face here? It just looks plain off.
Tried reaching out again but hadn’t heard back from ya.
There are some misc typos scattered about, such as “fovor” instead of favor or missing a “be” in “Sophia happens to a member of his party.”
Sister’s dialogue had issues yes. I’m just pointing out separately how the cat’s way of speaking is likely meant to sound off, but the text itself could use still some adjustments.
I assumed the weird dialogue from the cat was meant to sound a bit off in terms of how they speak, but still couldn’t understand half of what was being said. Meanwhile, noticed in prior chapters some weird phrasing on what should be simple fixes, such as the “Sand Goblins” instead being referred...
Afaik, there weren’t any plans on what series to continue or drop. Only after returning has there been decisions for what to stick with and prioritize.
Unfortunately Irl obligations happen. Rather than drop the projects entirely, goal is to fully catch up and continue to release scanlations for the current chapters.
It’s a very simple series for very simple minded readers.
Jobless protagonist gets underestimated by bullies and idiot adults
Proves them wrong by maxing out his stats in any given skill with 0 effort
Haters huff max amounts of copium while all the girls fall head over heels for him
Rinse and...
People’s relationships with one another can be complicated and messy, so I don’t entirely mind the protagonist trying to differentiate between his feelings of romantic vs familial love. That said, it feels like the author is really forcing all of this melodrama over the older sister trying to...
Part of me suspects that she used that as a convenient excuse to help out both Aria and Lyle. But I also wouldn’t be surprised for her to not be opposed to such an outcome, as she’s the type of childhood friend who wants to be useful.
Hopefully doesn’t lead into the annoying misunderstanding cliché that leads to a potential breakup. Instead will have him learning from experience the do’s and don’t under a different perspective, rather than having her try to be a homewrecker.
Even with the cliffhanger outcome being rather obvious, won’t lie: Really want to see the next part badly in terms of how he reacts and how she reacts in return.