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This is great.

It just me or was "Crescent Moon and Doughnuts" a more appealing name than "Doughnuts Under a Crescent Moon"?

Been so long I'm bewildered

What a waste of time. As I said in my original message, @Lambdadelta_Umineko, please recruit a proofreader. I didn't beat around the bush, it was the first thing I said. Me calling the current proofreading level atrocious was the LAST thing I said, because the point wasn't to attack you; it was...

Also, portraying yourself as "not wanting to do this" is manipulative and disingenuous. If you don't want to do something, don't do it. If you think your work is high quality, make your argument on the basis of your work. My work is unlikely to be flawless, but if you want to go to blows, I...

Nothing I said was intended to be nor written as an insult. Everything I said was said with the intent to emphasize that the proofreading quality of the chapter was very low, and that I sincerely hoped you would improve it, or at least improve future releases. In case that wasn't clear, let me...

You need to get a proofreader. Ideally, proofread this chapter and upload the edits. I'd volunteer, but I'm already overloaded. Please look for a proofreader; at least edit a recruiting page into your chapters or use Grammarly or something, because the current proofreading level is atrocious.

I miss the "-desu" the other group added, but this is so much better.

Woosh

Friendly fellow.

@xyzzy no problem with the premise itself, but this chapter specifically had such disorienting dialogue it felt like a seesaw. I don't know if it was translation error or something else but after it got re-uploaded it's more readable, though still by far the weakest chapter in the series thus...

Did anyone else have no idea what the fuck was going on in this chapter? I don't know if it was a translation issue or something else but I was getting something akin to nausea or seasickness while reading it, it was so disorienting.

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I don't mind, but why is the gap between uploads so long? Does it only release occasionally? Are you all really busy? Are the raws hard to come by?

Was about to say "him again" but someone beat me to it lol

He lookin' less and less human by the chapter

@justabhi11 it's still broken.

Well that's an unbelievably awful outcome.

They never can leave well enough alone

"And what will glaring at me achieve, huh?" Glares right back