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    Destiny Unchain Online: Kyuuketsuki Shoujo to Natte, Yagate 'Aka no Maou' to Yobareru You ni Narimashita

    Remember in chapter 1 or 2 when there was an overarching plot seemingly being setup about maybe the game world being real, the MC's mom being a vampire irl, and maybe this actually being her real body or something? And her parents made the game for her? Idk. Something along those lines. Anyway...
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    Eroge no Sekai de Slow Life ~Issho ni Isekai Teni shitekita Yarisaa no Daigakusei-tachi ni Tsuihou sareta node, Henkyou de Muteki ni Natte Shin no He…

    Author. You've already committed to writing erotica. There's already insertion. There are other peers in your genre that show full sex scenes. Savage hero, isekai meikyuu de harem o, reincarnated carrier. We're not here for blueball gags. Get with the program or gtfo.
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    Onna Chara de Isekai Teni shite Cheatppoi kedo Zako Chara na no de Medatazu Heiwa na Shomin wo Mezashimasu!

    Grown man acting like a teenaged girl. Would've rather it just been a teenaged girl character, but since the story invoked gender bender, I'd at least expect some mismatching in expected behavior. If you removed chapter 1, the rest of the story would flow just as it does. But now there's a...
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    Drawing - Saikyou Mangaka wa Oekaki Skill de Isekai Musou Suru!

    I think I hate the princess more than the MC. She's the cause of all MC's major problems and she accomplishes nothing by herself. Name me one time in this entire story that the princess wants something done and she doesn't immediately volunteer MC to do it for her. She wants to become queen, but...
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    Meiou-sama ga Tooru no desu yo! @COMIC

    Author sans, author sans! You can create interesting stories with conflict without everything having to be forced and without having to write characters that have less brain activity than 5 year olds, author sans!
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