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Its a bit annoying that he wasn't able to anticipate leyrin's presence. Surely you would think that someone like him would have prepared for that eventuality. Even someone without his knowledge and wisdom would be extremely conscious of such a powerful, looming threat. It makes it seem like he's...

Its funny, I was writing a swordsman mentor character a few days ago who had a line: "swing your sword with the weight of your conviction" Great minds, am I right?

To think of it as an opportunity that lord would reveal his apostle doesn't make sense. Obviously he sees it in his benefit to do so. If anything, it should make you much more cautious.

That was too vague. "We kill all these people because we had to even though we knew it was wrong." Its a one dimensional solution to the problem. I highly doubt the circumstances were so dire that it was the only choice they could make. If they have the power in their organizations to kill tens...

As a romance fan I could see the ending from the first mention of this story like Keima from The World God Only Knows. I don't feel like kd and heretic have been acting very realistically from the get go and the writing hasn't been very subtle. The double speak connections didn't make very much...

Wtf? He has a good side to him? He hasn't shown a single redeeming quality.

I can't really make up my mind about this. There are parts of it that are very poorly done and parts that are very well done. At the very least, the writer definitely put some care into it. That alone is worth seeing what comes out of this.

Yeaaaa this is getting to the end of the rope for me. The MC is too OP and the system works too conveniently for him. Infinite lives is an overwhelmingly OP ability already, but then he gets skills stealing, another absurdly OP ability on top of that, not to mention the convenient rewards he...

It didn't hit for me. I'm a pretty empathetic person, but it felt a bit too surreal. "the other world" felt like some weird dream with a comically evil guy. The children repeating the same lines like a broken record dehumanized them.

This seems quite a bit too convenient. I could overlook it in the beginning, but its getting a bit out of hand at this point with the spirit looking at the cards and him soloing a 34 person boss after only a week of training. Hes stacked with OP abilities, yet that isn't even enough. Frankly...

Ok, this is getting a bit more compelling. Abusing the skill to travel back in time with no penalties at his rank is nice, even if time travel and reincarnating are generally oppressively OP.

Not much confidence in this. It's difficult to have a character that can't die. The threat is gone, so you have to create different kinds of conflict. I'm not interested in watching someone just scale in power over time with little effort and no risk.

He should be significantly stronger than he was in his past life and he is effectively at least 40 years old in terms of experience, in addition to his experience fighting demons on the front lines. Yet, he is far from beating the knight captain and that black mage? It seems quite a bit off...

Wow, the mom really did a 180. Seems like the writer had some conflicts in mind while Eugene was at home, but decided to go a different direction.

I don't really understand what's going on with the power levels here. He should be significantly stronger than his past self at this point. Considering the body is his and its imbued with mana from a strong black mage and is under the control of another soul, he should still be able to dumpster...

The song and dance with the black mage tower master is a bit dull. Too much back and forth. Edit: Also, the reason the black knights had for not fighting was that they weren't confident they would win, but it would also threaten the peace that their ancestor had bargained for. In that sense, it...

These characters are a bit too convenient, but its only the beginning.

Shaping up nicely. I very much like that his behavior is different than what you would expect of a child since he was a warrior on the front lines in his past life. Much more consistent than other reincarnation stories. I also like that he's not some morally irreproachable hero, but that he's...

This is one of those contrived situations that plays out in an unreasonably favorable way. Even overlooking the experience he should have after a thousand years, charging in was a tactic mistake, and the guerilla warfare tactic alternative he decided not to use would have been as well. The key...

The trope of hiding true power is obnoxious in cases like this. It feels more like a contrived reason to facilitate plot than a reasonable decision for the character