Sky is blue, grass is green, teenagers are stupid, hormones make it worse. Let this be a lesson to everyone involved.
They'd both probably be way better off if they just went their separate ways, but there's no story if that happens, so.
"Th-thank you...Is a Mother in Her 30s Like Me Alright."
"Is a Mother in Her 30s Like Me Alright?"
"Because...um...you're a mother in her 30s, and you're alright."
"Oh yeah."
Comedy option: leave all onomatopoeia untouched, no side notes or footnotes. At the end of the chapter, link readers to resources for learning how to read katakana.
I can't even imagine wanting to disintegrate Leonora or Scarlet, regardless of how much they were jerks when first introduced. Of course Eva adopted them, they're far too precious to let them go! Look at how they still buy in to the muscle training even after the protein powder found new and...
And she is; she was with the guy she loves, and now she isn't anymore and can't be*, because the fallout from her actions eventually led him to someone else.
*