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Holy shit, I can't tell if the author cooked this up in 30 minutes thinking its good or is deliberately trying to craft god knows the worst piece of fiction I've read in a long time. MC gets trauma dumped, gets over it in less than 2 pages by talking to a girl he never met and coincidentally was...

What the fuck is going on. Why are we just dropping bomb after bomb first chapter in. The pacing is horrendous, and the unexpected thrown plot conflicts are just outright confusing. Like wdym he gets bullied in the first chapter, lost his girlfriend, whole schools hates him, and now he meets a...

9/10. Really good piece of fiction. Although I would of appreciated if we expanded a little bit more on the "loops" the MC had, but I get it, if we did the pacing would be bad. I also think we should be provided with more context on how the MC is able to somehow solve every case. It's true that...

Not bad. I would of definitely prefered if the backstory for her would be delivered throughout the pace of the story, rather than just dumping it all into 3 consecutive chapters. It was hard to take in and felt like a bomb, but it definitely would be better if you were to scatter the backstory...