Yeah... Feels weird to introduce another guy who would probably become a romantic interest so early when we barely have any interaction between the main ones.
Yeah pretty sure she's only bullshitting. As she said, all of this cames from what she thinks and the way she speaks it's like she's not even sure herself. Husband could very well just get ill naturally.
I was thinking the same. I'll get it if she was a child, was too young for the truth or something among those lines, but she's 18, she's an adult already.
Ok, I was really confused and though I just didn't remember that they started dating, so I went to check the last chapter and indeed, it seems it's just charlotte thinking the thing in the last chapter was her asking him to go out.
Yeah... The synopsis was misleading. Also, wtf? How did they arrive to the conclusion she's a rental girlfriend? If I saw that I'll think she's a tarot reader/fortune teller or something, not a rental girlfriend.
"Work hard so you get recognized" Bruh, if the game ends up a masterpiece no one is going to recognize programmer number 354. All the credits goes to the lead figures.
Sfx localized is better in this case. Personally I think sfx should be localized only if it's relevant for the scene it's in, otherwise it's fine to just leave it without localizing it. In this case it's relevant because she reacts to the heartbeat.